we where asked to rank  to a few posts in oder from most helpful to most helpful here was my response.

thumbs up or thumbs down sorting activity

Number 1 

penny was sending an email to her teacher Ms D grate but she wasn’t using the correct language or the correct sentences so I put this one as the worst message for all those reasons i just stated.

2. I believe that number seven was the second wort message because their was no expiation of why she loved the story. If it was my story I would what to know what part you loved so i could include more of what you loved.

3. I also believe number 6 is also not a great message because it doesn’t have the correct spelling and it is not something to be told on email or not told anywhere especially if you have not eve asked their permission to talk about them or include the in your message.

4. box eight states that Dannie doesn’t understand  why Paul is friends with Jeremy but reallyI don’t think you should talk behind peoples back at all and maybe their are reasons why he is friends that you may not know about.  

5. box number two is not really within subject that is most likely for another message or you could wait to talk about it the next day . 

 6. box four states that sally got a new dog and she was exited to show the class it was a nice message but she did not include Dear (name) or full stops and capital letters. 

7. box number five was a really good message but I enjoyed number three better because it had a question for the writer to answer 

8. Box number three caught my eye it had full stops and had a question.  

so that is my opinion thank you very much for reading !